1st Posted Song Attempt

So I did a quick workshop on song writing and I've been trying to come up with my own. This is one I did today at work because I was bored. It might seem a little emo I'm sorry I'm still learning.

Beat the World, Won the Game.

V1:
C Em
Been tricked by so many girls,
G D
They bought me such pain,
C Em
Manipulating my ways,
G D
Don't know why I always pay.

V2:
C Em
She was hurting from love to,
G D
Tired of every bad guy,
C Em
Sick of scrapping the barrel,
G D
Watching as her heart fell.

Chorus:
C Em G D
Together we were broke,
C Em G D
She opened up and spoke,
C Em G D
I'm not some other bloke,
C Em G D
Relationship provoked.

V3:
C Em
Together sharing our pain,
G D
Breaking the barriers down,
C Em
Never said these things before,
G D
In my walls you made a door.

V4:
C Em
Heeling as we try to share,
G D
Building trust and letting go,
C Em
No remorse found in me now,
G D
Mended me so take a bow.

Bridge:
C Em
Let me inside,
Em D
Let me help you,
C Em
We beat the world,
Em D
We've won the game